I love your characters but I think something is missing. I might do a complete body of at least one of the characters or maybe show (some or all of them) performing together as a group instead of individual splashes. Just ideas! Good Luck at LA, I want a full report! :)
See, I think that's what was bothering me too-none of them are complete. I think I'm going to use a narrative spread instead. I was thinking about live blogging, but there's no way that'll happend. I'll take tons of notes-promise! :)
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